Beyond Redemption
Death reaches the corner of my mind!
When all expectations begin to die!
I have failed you,
I cannot recover!
The shame I built upon myself,
is beyond the point of redemption!
The gates are closing,
And I am left behind!
Dwealing on the impact of my life!
I have failed to reach them.
I have failed tonight,
No use rebuilding.
The world we left behind.
This is our end.
Fate has lead me to regret!
Now I'm lost in it!
Where can this path lead!?
Or is there nothing left for me!?
I know I failed, but the pain won't leave!
This is my hope, my prayer,
Set me free!
I have failed to reach them.
I have failed tonight,
No use rebuilding.
The world we left behind.
This is our end!
We are Beyond Redemption!
That is probably one of my favorite titles for a song. It automatically gets you into the feel of the guilt and pain your characters feel. what a powerful tool.
ReplyDeleteline that struck me most was: "I know I failed, but the pain won't leave!" It's like...in life, we all make mistakes. We try and learn by them and move on. But there are certain things that just sort of...haunt us.
Thank you! I wrote it when I was feeling down, like I had made a mistake! It turned out not to be my fault, but it lead to this song!
ReplyDeletewell God always turns things around for good, right? :) but seriously, everything you write turns out amazingly, no matter what you're going through or feeling! i'm proud of ya, friend!
ReplyDeleteThank you! That means a lot! I agree God does turn things around, always! :)
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